Oliver S's writing
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Great writing from Oliver. I like how you have used fronted adverbials in your setting description. Don't forget to check for missing capital letters in your instructions. What flavour jam would you choose- I love raspberry. I am so pleased that you are continuing with the maths factor each day too. Fab work :)